15Apr2012
Author: Bryan Butvidas
Publication: February 12th, 2012
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Description: “Love is selflessly giving your breath away to allow someone else to breathe.”
The dramatic story of two lovers named Airith and Rapha; both cyborgs created to kill one another, who end up falling in love and causing the world to be scorched by The Sadness. In the end, one love will give their life away to save the other.
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My Review:
I was lucky enough to recieve this book from the author in exchange for an honest review in one of the Young Adult Reads group's "Read to Review" events on GoodReads.
With the story of two star-crossed cyborgs in a dystopian future world, each sharing half of one heart that they both need in it's entirity to survive, Airith - Death of a True Love certainly had an original and intriguing story premise. And being a novella (it took me roughly an hour and a half to read the whole thing), it would be quite a feat to successfully complete world-building and explainations of such a complex story in so little time. In my opinion, I don't think the author was successful.
It almost felt as if I was reading a rough draft. The book lacked the "meat" of build up, getting to know characters, and understanding the future world, etc that are crucial in this sort of story. Names such as "The Mother", "Life Pool", and "Magija" were thrown around without any explaination until about halfway through the novella. Even then, they were only brushed over. I think that if the explainations, etc were added throughout the story appropriately, then this "rough-draft" novella could become a wonderful full length novel. Besides the things that this book lacked, there were things that it did have that bothered me.
It really didn't bother me so much, but I think it should be noted that were some grammar errors throughout the book. A missing period here, missing comma there, missing new paragraph starts for new speakers (for most of the first half of the book, after that it wasn't a problem), and the occasional wrong word/wrong tense (past vs. passed, cover vs. covered, etc). Nothing that a once over editing couldn't fix easily. As I said, didn't bother me too much though.
The unique story of Airith - Death of a True Love has a lot of promise, so with a bit of fixing up here and there, I think this book could become a real gem. Of course, everything I said in this review is my personal opinion on the book and others may feel differently. I'd also like to mention that at the back of the book (at least for ebook) there were pictures to go along with the story that were really beautiful and well done.
Summed Up:
I liked the story premise and the pictures in the back were really cool too. I wish that the story had been executed better though, and there were some grammer errors and the story was much too short for such a complex storyline.
About the Author
Linny is the 18 year old girl and self-proclaimed mastermind behind Linny's Literature. She enjoys reading, designing, and spending time with her family. Learn more about her on the Meet Linny page.
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